When I looked up to see the ship, the view changed and it looked up towards the ship, in the same way as I was looking up. I found it inapropriate
I understand - I'll have a think about that.
gorgon does feel like a nasty dude.
He is. I also changed a name to make things clearer Garon -> Telox, so it's now Gorgon (the big eye) and Telox.
Maybe the dialogs are short and don't give luch insight on the details.
Possibly - but there is more detail as you go on and since there's no voice acting, I've elected to keep the text to a minimum.
and I don't think he's even gonna think of making a copy since he's not a computer nerd,
Hmm. Obviously from my perspective the last thing I'd like to see is the beta making its way on to the internet (with your key file attached!), but you know the guy, so I guess it's your call if he asks for a copy. Myself, I'd rather it not be distributed to anyone beyond the beta testers. Still, if you demo it, I'd be keen to hear how it runs - I'm still concerned at fps in some places (particularly level10).
Nice to be on holiday ay?